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  1. Posted: August 8, 2015In: Public

    "When an upper-class rebel is suddenly disinherited by his fed-up father, he struggles to win his father?s approval in order to have his inheritance restored, but his plans derail when he is forcibly drafted to fight in the second US civil war."

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 9, 2015 at 10:18 am

    Learning to survive on your own is completely different to winning back a father's good graces. In you version he would transform into his own man. What I am getting is that he is willing to manipulate to restore his position.

    Learning to survive on your own is completely different to winning back a father’s good graces. In you version he would transform into his own man. What I am getting is that he is willing to manipulate to restore his position.

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  2. Posted: August 7, 2015In: Public

    Miami Air ramp-service personal engage in the systematic looting of airport luggage and merchandize, which leads to the death of eight ?Ramp Rats? and the arrest of sixty-three other luggage handlers and airport personnel.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2015 at 6:38 am

    How do they die? I think that is the story but it is glossed over. We have the start and how it ends, but the middle hour is missing.

    How do they die? I think that is the story but it is glossed over. We have the start and how it ends, but the middle hour is missing.

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  3. Posted: August 8, 2015In: Public

    After a homeless young man, who thinks he brings a misfortune whenever he is, meets his idol and becomes a member of a group with super-powered people, called Core-holders, he starts thinking that this is turnaround in his life. Its awesome, its everything he ever wanted and? Core-holders start mysteriously dying. Of course.

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    Added an answer on August 8, 2015 at 6:34 am

    The most important thing you need to add is his main goal and what or who is stopping him. What is he trying to achieve.

    The most important thing you need to add is his main goal and what or who is stopping him. What is he trying to achieve.

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