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  1. Posted: August 1, 2015In: Public

    When a passive psychiatrist?s patient discovers his secret ability to sense and absorb people?s mental distress, she pressures him to challenge his exploitative boss in order to pursue his dream of starting a nonprofit practice.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 2, 2015 at 9:37 pm

    The movie is about the person doing the actions. Therefore this is really about the patient as it is told through her eyes. What is the goals and what would be standing in the way of success.?

    The movie is about the person doing the actions. Therefore this is really about the patient as it is told through her eyes. What is the goals and what would be standing in the way of success.?

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2015In: Public

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 2, 2015 at 6:35 pm

    Here is the story in more detail. The torture will be explained. There is a group known as "the farm" which somehow one step ahead of the government's information gathers. The torturer is told his next prisoner was part of a terror group that has access to millions of dollars. He is tasked with findRead more

    Here is the story in more detail.

    The torture will be explained. There is a group known as “the farm” which somehow one step ahead of the government’s information gathers. The torturer is told his next prisoner was part of a terror group that has access to millions of dollars. He is tasked with finding the money and his connections. The director of operations is getting bits of info and acting. He keeps referring to his man getting info out of the suspect.

    During the interview we see the police beginning to find targets.

    Suddenly we see that the torturer is hinting that he will for a fee help the prisoner. It becomes apparent that he is the farm. He starts getting more in depth info.

    About this time it becomes apparent that the prisoner is the person on the inside the director is referring to. The entire torture has been to extract info from the torturer.

    There are a few metaphors at play. The torturer represents a corrupt government process, it has all the power of the people. The people are represented by the prisoner and the cops. The prisoner are the oppressed, while the police are those willing to stand up for what is right.

    So there you go. A quick view into where I am heading.

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  3. Posted: August 1, 2015In: Public

    When a passive psychiatrist?s patient discovers his secret ability to sense and absorb people?s mental distress, she pressures him to challenge his exploitative boss in order to pursue his dream of starting a nonprofit practice.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 2, 2015 at 7:56 am

    I am not sure I like the use of passive. It sounds like it is a style or technique. One story element you may have to be careful handle well is what I call "why not just call the cops". This is when the obvious action would just end the story. If he know what people are thinking and feeling. How doeRead more

    I am not sure I like the use of passive. It sounds like it is a style or technique. One story element you may have to be careful handle well is what I call “why not just call the cops”. This is when the obvious action would just end the story.

    If he know what people are thinking and feeling. How does his boss manipulate him? Why wouldn’t he pull on the bosses emotional triggers?

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