1. Posted: July 31, 2015In:

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    But the undercover aspect works better in my current thinking if it is common practice, the torture of death row inmates. I am not going to underline the date. It is just going to be a fact of the world.

    But the undercover aspect works better in my current thinking if it is common practice, the torture of death row inmates. I am not going to underline the date. It is just going to be a fact of the world.

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2015In:

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    Thanks.

    Thanks.

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2015In:

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter

    The near future because I want people to see it as a possibility, not some abstract fantasy. It is more of a battle of wills. We think the agent is actually a bad guy until the reveal going into the third act. We then have to save him before the torturer carries out the sentence.

    The near future because I want people to see it as a possibility, not some abstract fantasy. It is more of a battle of wills. We think the agent is actually a bad guy until the reveal going into the third act.

    We then have to save him before the torturer carries out the sentence.

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