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A cunning serial predator lures a stranded schoolgirl back to his den, where he tries to make her a pawn in his sadistic game, or, can she outplay him?
The question doesn't help. Try stating her aim. Plus how does he use her? Try explaining how their goals compete.
The question doesn’t help. Try stating her aim. Plus how does he use her? Try explaining how their goals compete.
See lessIn 1950?s Los Angeles a vengeful rookie DA learns to think like the notorious criminals he prosecutes in order to bring justice to the Southland.
Think like a criminal is way to vague and doesn't say enough. Does he become violent or mean or start taking drugs. It doesn't say enough for me to form an opinion on the story. I worked in intelligence and ran several investigation teams. If anyone is interested in how an investigation is run emailRead more
Think like a criminal is way to vague and doesn’t say enough. Does he become violent or mean or start taking drugs. It doesn’t say enough for me to form an opinion on the story.
I worked in intelligence and ran several investigation teams. If anyone is interested in how an investigation is run email me. craig.griffiths@askfindbuy.com it might help anyone wanting to write real cop stuff.
See lessWhen told to deliver a package to a vicious mob boss, a desperate young Christian woman steals a car and finds herself menaced by a deranged truck driver pursuing her car across country roads, forcing her to devise a plan that would save her and her little brother held by the mob boss from death
Didn't this start as a car load of cocaine? I really preferred that idea. It stopped her from go for help. Her troubles had to remain secret. It truly isolated the character. I have no problem in liking an unlikable character. Look at "Heathers" the MC is killing her friends, or five seasons of theRead more
Didn’t this start as a car load of cocaine? I really preferred that idea. It stopped her from go for help. Her troubles had to remain secret. It truly isolated the character. I have no problem in liking an unlikable character. Look at “Heathers” the MC is killing her friends, or five seasons of the wire.
Anyhow, Nir is correct. It needs a rewrite to make it read clearer.
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