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When a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.
Caleb you start thinking about cast get the story right. I mean what is the theme? What is the arc of the character? How will he change? You may be able to achieve that in an hour. Don't tie yourself to a length or series, after all it isn't in your control. My brother had a series on SBS, "Comedy SRead more
Caleb you start thinking about cast get the story right. I mean what is the theme? What is the arc of the character? How will he change? You may be able to achieve that in an hour. Don’t tie yourself to a length or series, after all it isn’t in your control.
My brother had a series on SBS, “Comedy School” they purchased eight shows. Halfway through production they dropped it to four. The show did great, rated well, Sydney Morning Herald had it down as the show to watch in its time slot. They didn’t go to a second season.
This may sound negative. I just want you to focus on what is in your control. Writing a killer story. Once you sell it move on to the next one. If you are a writer (which is something you feel not do) you will have a hundred stories to tell.
PS don’t worry if you think your story has element from other stories, everything does. Avatar and Dances With Wolves are the same film in different settings.
See lessA man secretly aware of his wife's affair with his rich and handsome boss, plots to murder him and eventually poison his wife and himself.
Come on dpg we all want to see bad people doing bad things, that the mainstay of the crime and horror genres. We need to know about what happens during the execution of his plan (pardon the pun). His plan is not his story. I feel we are missing the BUT and and explanation.
Come on dpg we all want to see bad people doing bad things, that the mainstay of the crime and horror genres.
We need to know about what happens during the execution of his plan (pardon the pun). His plan is not his story. I feel we are missing the BUT and and explanation.
See lessWhen a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.
When a 17 year-old with dreams of wrestling at the Sydney Olympics does a work at a Sydney Car Wash, he becomes entangled in a shady world stand-over and crime for his boss while his dreams of wrestling becomes more and more distant. The work for the dole is, I think, a detail not needed in the loglRead more
When a 17 year-old with dreams of wrestling at the Sydney Olympics does a work at a Sydney Car Wash, he becomes entangled in a shady world stand-over and crime for his boss while his dreams of wrestling becomes more and more distant.
The work for the dole is, I think, a detail not needed in the logline as it is not part of the big picture. I dropped the business man as a business is ran by business people and you don’t need to say it, helps cut the word count, makes for an easier read.
What year is it set in? I can see this as an SBS series. Good concept.
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