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  1. Posted: May 14, 2015In: Public

    When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 14, 2015 at 1:54 pm

    I don't like "unceremoniously" in this. I don't think it works. I can see someone being "unceremoniously" dismissed from a job. But (for me) it indicates someone that has something done to them without regard for them. Thrusting someone into a situation indicates that they are being involved in theRead more

    I don’t like “unceremoniously” in this. I don’t think it works. I can see someone being “unceremoniously” dismissed from a job. But (for me) it indicates someone that has something done to them without regard for them. Thrusting someone into a situation indicates that they are being involved in the scenario. I don’t think “unceremoniously” work well in this context.

    Otherwise the line has come along well.

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  2. Posted: May 14, 2015In: Public

    When a troubled American expatriate is offered work at the Tengen Hotel, he soon discovers that Tokyo’s most exclusive hotel is also the base of operations for a major crime syndicate. Now embroiled in their conspiracy to appropriate control over the city, the expatriate must choose between duty or sentiment as both his mettle and loyalty are put to the test.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 14, 2015 at 1:45 pm

    Me too. Even if not by force, but a mass movement.

    Me too. Even if not by force, but a mass movement.

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  3. Posted: May 11, 2015In: Public

    A young street level dealer must navigate the mine field of gang culture to get out before the gang implodes in a bloody internal war.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 13, 2015 at 2:09 pm

    If he leaves they will kill him. He think he knows what is coming and he can't leave his brother to what he believes is death.

    If he leaves they will kill him. He think he knows what is coming and he can’t leave his brother to what he believes is death.

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