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A young street level dealer must navigate the mine field of gang culture to get out before the gang implodes in a bloody internal war.
Their a number of members being killed. Everyone knows it is member on member. He witnesses the bosses son kill the bosses friend. The boss doesn't know who did it and puts out a reward. Running appears to be his only option, but he needs to save his brother. If he runs, they'll blame his brother, hRead more
Their a number of members being killed. Everyone knows it is member on member. He witnesses the bosses son kill the bosses friend. The boss doesn’t know who did it and puts out a reward. Running appears to be his only option, but he needs to save his brother. If he runs, they’ll blame his brother, he thinks.
See lessRecently hired as a lounge bartender, an American expatriate is unceremoniously thrust into the no-holds-barred criminal underworld of Japan when he discovers that the residential hotel he works in is controlled by a major crime syndicate. Now moonlighting as a Yakuza enforcer, the expatriate must deal with violent lieutenants, manipulative allies, corrupt officials and seductive women all while trying to solve the murder of an old acquaintance.
Once he is an enforcer I take it his bar duties cease? That might be where the story actually starts. His entire goal is to find his friends killer. That is the story. Write that. Drop the other stuff. The murder is the gift, everything else is wrapping paper. The other question why does he want toRead more
Once he is an enforcer I take it his bar duties cease? That might be where the story actually starts. His entire goal is to find his friends killer. That is the story. Write that. Drop the other stuff. The murder is the gift, everything else is wrapping paper.
The other question why does he want to solve it and is there a time component?
“Working as a yakuza enforcer in Japan an American puts his own life on the hunting his friends killer”.
May not be your story. But you get the point. Go for the throat. Grab the readers attention, everything else is for the synopsis.
See lessA young street level dealer must navigate the mine field of gang culture to get out before the gang implodes in a bloody internal war.
No chance to disappear. Think mafia, leaving is disloyal. Plus why leave, you going to the cops? Death unless you're 100%. There is a power struggle. The gang has grown and is splintering. He is scared and knows he will not survive. He is tough enough to sell drugs. But knows in the coming fight he'Read more
No chance to disappear. Think mafia, leaving is disloyal. Plus why leave, you going to the cops? Death unless you’re 100%. There is a power struggle. The gang has grown and is splintering.
He is scared and knows he will not survive. He is tough enough to sell drugs. But knows in the coming fight he’ll be asked to do stuff. He knows he’ll fail.
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