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  1. Posted: March 23, 2015In: Public

    A woman's ghost appears to her husband to try and prevent his suicide and convince him to go on living. The longer she stays the less chance she has of entering heaven and the harder it is for him to move on.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 25, 2015 at 8:29 pm

    Not being done as a short. I have fleshed out about 30 beats (use of a better term). Only three locations all of them I have unlimited access. I see her communication with her husband as "awake dreams". He originally thinks suicide may reunite them. I think of her as the wife who cares for the alcohRead more

    Not being done as a short. I have fleshed out about 30 beats (use of a better term). Only three locations all of them I have unlimited access. I see her communication with her husband as “awake dreams”.

    He originally thinks suicide may reunite them. I think of her as the wife who cares for the alcoholic husband. She deep down knows nothing she does will help him. He can only help himself. Yet she can not stop.

    How much is she willing to sacrifice? How long before he realises he is hurting her by letting her sacrifice everything?

    I am in index card heaven at the moment.

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  2. Posted: March 23, 2015In: Public

    A woman's ghost appears to her husband to try and prevent his suicide and convince him to go on living. The longer she stays the less chance she has of entering heaven and the harder it is for him to move on.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 25, 2015 at 7:32 am

    Perfect logline. For me anyway. It is not going to be my normal action/drama with people dropping like flies. I was talking to my daughter (filmmaker) and depending on how it goes. May consider shooting it in my house.

    Perfect logline. For me anyway. It is not going to be my normal action/drama with people dropping like flies. I was talking to my daughter (filmmaker) and depending on how it goes. May consider shooting it in my house.

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  3. Posted: March 23, 2015In: Public

    A man races against time to save his fiance on the 74th floor of the South Tower on 9/11.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on March 24, 2015 at 5:50 am

    These Irwin Allen type stories need little else unless you have something special.

    These Irwin Allen type stories need little else unless you have something special.

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