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  1. Posted: April 2, 2015In: Public

    A teen discovers a dark secret about his family, he must go on a perilous journey in order to save not only himself, but an entire world.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 3, 2015 at 8:01 am

    If you state the dark secret you have also imply why the teen just doesn't call the cops. A little tricky but it will make the story ring true or at least not feel dumb.

    If you state the dark secret you have also imply why the teen just doesn’t call the cops. A little tricky but it will make the story ring true or at least not feel dumb.

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  2. Posted: April 2, 2015In: Public

    When a crate of unknown origin is taken and murder surrounds the mystery, down and out Private Investigator, Connor Collins, must figure out how to stop the ancient Egyptian magic causing havoc before all is lost.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 3, 2015 at 7:57 am

    If you drop the murder reference the line doesn't suffer. The theft of a mysterious crate trigger an ancient Egyptian magic. A down and out detective must figure out to how stop it before it destroys the world.

    If you drop the murder reference the line doesn’t suffer.

    The theft of a mysterious crate trigger an ancient Egyptian magic. A down and out detective must figure out to how stop it before it destroys the world.

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  3. Posted: April 1, 2015In: Public

    A teen wants a new life but his bad past keeps holding him back.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on April 2, 2015 at 10:46 pm

    Write down where the teen is in life (bad past or bad present). Now write as far as believably possible away from that. This is the journey. Describe that and what is preventing it. A teen from a ghetto wants to be the first person he knows to attend college but a racist principal and a broken educaRead more

    Write down where the teen is in life (bad past or bad present). Now write as far as believably possible away from that. This is the journey. Describe that and what is preventing it.

    A teen from a ghetto wants to be the first person he knows to attend college but a racist principal and a broken education system stand in his way.

    Not perfect, but more specific.

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