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"When an uptight accountant agrees to spend Christmas with his fiance' and her parents, he ends up in the last place he would ever want to be, a new age hippy commune, and must learn to accept their free spirit lifestyle or escape and risk losing his future bride."
If you decide to keep it Christmas, it could show his inflexibility as they were willing to celebrate something they thought was important to him.
If you decide to keep it Christmas, it could show his inflexibility as they were willing to celebrate something they thought was important to him.
See lessAn egocentric writer translates a novel that details the impending torture of him and his family unless he figures out who wrote it and makes amends.
The only bit that I am tripping over on is the last few words. They feel a bit like "and they all lived happily ever after". "Who wrote it and make a means" is to vague and lacks real action. Perhaps outline what motivate the original author, then it gives you something to resolve. I like it. I receRead more
The only bit that I am tripping over on is the last few words. They feel a bit like “and they all lived happily ever after”. “Who wrote it and make a means” is to vague and lacks real action. Perhaps outline what motivate the original author, then it gives you something to resolve.
I like it. I recent saw a film about a priest that during confession is told he is going to be murder. The person in confession gives him 7 days (I think) to settle his affairs.
Is egocentric the best word to describe the writer. Nir immediately headed in a direction I didn’t. I know some egocentric people that I could never describe as a prick. Unless the word is a good fit drop it till you find the perfect word.
Perhaps the writer is an innocent victim, the other author is obviously deranged.
See lessWhen women are refused jobs at the city's largest company, a group of women must overcome backward attitudes, language barriers, poverty and tradition to ignite a community battle from the factory gates to the highest courts, for equality.
BHP was the biggest employer down there. Wollongong is a good trip to Sydney. Perhaps start with the women's dilemma. "When woman from a small coast community are denied employment from to town's large employer, a global corporation. They fight back from the fence to the highest court". I wasn't surRead more
BHP was the biggest employer down there. Wollongong is a good trip to Sydney. Perhaps start with the women’s dilemma. “When woman from a small coast community are denied employment from to town’s large employer, a global corporation. They fight back from the fence to the highest court”.
I wasn’t sure why they just didn’t move on in your first version.
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