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  1. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    When a flourishing actress plans to murder her teenage heartthrob, she sleeps her way through Hollywood, before his final Premier.

    debbiemoon Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:38 am

    What's the tone here? Horror, black comedy? I don't think you should worry at all about the title. If people don't like it, it'll get changed at some later date. For now, it's striking and memorable. I think we need to know why she wants him dead, and why sleeping her way through Hollywood is goingRead more

    What’s the tone here? Horror, black comedy?

    I don’t think you should worry at all about the title. If people don’t like it, it’ll get changed at some later date. For now, it’s striking and memorable.

    I think we need to know why she wants him dead, and why sleeping her way through Hollywood is going to accomplish that. Why is she killing him at the premiere?

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  2. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    With a touch, Lissa can see one's true love, just never her own. When Skeptic Magazine sends their top reporter to interview her, will she dare to fall in love again?

    debbiemoon Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:31 am

    So, the reporter is her true love; doesn't that make her his true love? So as soon as she touches him, she'll know his true love - that is, her. So is the conflict of the story that one day, she meets someone whose true love she is - but she doesn't like him, doesn't want to be with him? Because thaRead more

    So, the reporter is her true love; doesn’t that make her his true love? So as soon as she touches him, she’ll know his true love – that is, her.

    So is the conflict of the story that one day, she meets someone whose true love she is – but she doesn’t like him, doesn’t want to be with him? Because that feels promising…

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  3. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    A successful golf instructor reconnects with his appetite and love of the game, when he agrees to share his round with a younger raw sportswoman.

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    Added an answer on December 21, 2012 at 7:28 am

    I'm not really sure what "sharing a round" means - playing together, I guess, but what's the timescale - one game? A season?

    I’m not really sure what “sharing a round” means – playing together, I guess, but what’s the timescale – one game? A season?

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