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  1. Posted: December 20, 2012In: Public

    When a compassionate ex-baseball star agrees to adopt the 10-year-old daughter of a former love who is dying, he soon learns that the young girl is actually his.

    debbiemoon Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 20, 2012 at 8:22 am

    Good situation, but I'm not seeing much of an obstacle here. What's the flaw he has to overcome to build a good life for his daughter (after all, he's already 'compassionate')?

    Good situation, but I’m not seeing much of an obstacle here. What’s the flaw he has to overcome to build a good life for his daughter (after all, he’s already ‘compassionate’)?

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  2. Posted: December 19, 2012In: Public

    Two teens on a police ride-along uncover a web of corruption, drugs and murder beneath the surface of their quiet Texas town – and must recover the evidence gathered by one teen's father, a cop murdered by his brother officers, if they're to survive the night…

    debbiemoon Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 19, 2012 at 11:42 pm

    When two teens on a police ride-along overhear a murder plot, they must find the evidence of police corruption collected by one teen's father if they're to save an innocent man - and survive the night...

    When two teens on a police ride-along overhear a murder plot, they must find the evidence of police corruption collected by one teen’s father if they’re to save an innocent man – and survive the night…

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  3. Posted: December 17, 2012In: Public

    An American single-father, hoping to reconcile with his greatest love, travels back to Ireland to learn she is dying with a 10-year-old daughter who is actually his.

    debbiemoon Penpusher
    Added an answer on December 17, 2012 at 8:57 am

    Okay, good. That's act one. And then what? Don't mean to sound facetious there, but I think you need to give some sense of what's going to happen. Reconciliation, I guess - but where's the conflict? Does he want to adopt daughter, but she, or mother, opposes that? Does daughter want to be adopted, bRead more

    Okay, good. That’s act one. And then what?

    Don’t mean to sound facetious there, but I think you need to give some sense of what’s going to happen. Reconciliation, I guess – but where’s the conflict? Does he want to adopt daughter, but she, or mother, opposes that? Does daughter want to be adopted, but he doesn’t want the responsibility? Does he have to prove she’s his? Try to prove she’s not? All very different movies…

    So can you give us a sense of the action and conflict of the movie in the logline?

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