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After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family.
"After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family." I like this version's idea. But the length needs to be trimmedRead more
“After his wife gives birth to a stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist the help of the state?s only necromancer to resurrect his daughter and break a generational curse that will kill all the female children born into the family.”
I like this version’s idea. But the length needs to be trimmed.
After his daughter is born stillborn, a wizard has three days to enlist a necromancer’s help to resurrect her and break a generational curse which kills female children of his family.?(32)
See lessI managed to cut ten words from your attempt.
When a witch who is also a medical doctor is left with three days to raise his daughter from the dead, he enlists the help of an ameteur witch who has three days to save her mother from a deadly disease.
DPG, good point. I was just trying to keep with the original idea, that the witch has a certain amount of time to revive the daughter before she is lost or whatever. In most stories that I read necromancers can animate any spirit no matter how long they've been dead, but there are certain caveats anRead more
DPG, good point. I was just trying to keep with the original idea, that the witch has a certain amount of time to revive the daughter before she is lost or whatever. In most stories that I read necromancers can animate any spirit no matter how long they’ve been dead, but there are certain caveats and such.
See lessI think something that no one has really?touched on is the differences set up between the two characters: the fact that one is medical living doctor, and the other is a ‘doctor’ of death. One heals the living and one is able to raise the dead. I’m guessing that the intent is to highlight the differences between the two characters during the story.
When a witch who is also a medical doctor is left with three days to raise his daughter from the dead, he enlists the help of an ameteur witch who has three days to save her mother from a deadly disease.
"When a witch who is also a medical doctor is left with three days to raise his daughter from the dead, he enlists the help of an amateur witch who has three days to save her mother from a deadly disease." Maybe you should try saying that the amateur is necromancer, and the only necromancer in the aRead more
“When a witch who is also a medical doctor is left with three days to raise his daughter from the dead, he enlists the help of an amateur witch who has three days to save her mother from a deadly disease.”
Maybe you should try saying that the amateur is necromancer, and the only necromancer in the area. And specify that the witch does not know necromancy, at least not enough to bring someone back.
Example:?After his daughter dies a witch has three day to enlist the help of the state’s only necromancer to save his daughter before her soul is lost forever.?(28)
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