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  1. Posted: September 16, 2016In: Drama

    When a black teenager is murdered, two homicide detectives struggle to set aside their differences as racial tensions erupt in 1990’s New Orleans.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 16, 2016 at 9:22 pm

    In 1990's New Orleans, an experienced, rule following black cop and an impulsive rookie must work together to bring the killer of a black teenager to justice before the riots it caused tear the city apart. (36) In 1990's New Orleans, when the murder of ?black teenager causes riots,?an experienced blRead more

    In 1990’s New Orleans, an experienced, rule following black cop and an impulsive rookie must work together to bring the killer of a black teenager to justice before the riots it caused tear the city apart. (36)

    In 1990’s New Orleans, when the murder of ?black teenager causes riots,?an experienced black cop must work with an impulsive, stubborn rookie to find the killer before the city is torn apart. (33)

    The focus of the logline should be on the relationship that is front in center, the mixed gender buddy cop type relationship. I couldn’t think of a good word for ‘rule following’ at the moment, but in both versions I tried to highlight the differences which cause the obstacle to their work.
    Hope this helps.

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  2. Posted: September 16, 2016In: Drama

    When a black teenager is murdered, two homicide detectives struggle to set aside their differences as racial tensions erupt in 1990’s New Orleans.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on September 16, 2016 at 8:07 am

    "When a black teenager is murdered, two homicide detectives struggle to set aside their differences as racial tensions erupt in 1990?s New Orleans."It ?seems the logline isn't complete. They must set aside their difference to....solve the case...and what do racial tensions have to do with them solviRead more

    “When a black teenager is murdered, two homicide detectives struggle to set aside their differences as racial tensions erupt in 1990?s New Orleans.”

    It ?seems the logline isn’t complete. They must set aside their difference to….solve the case…and what do racial tensions have to do with them solving the case??

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  3. Posted: July 31, 2016In: SciFi

    An orphaned young woman discovers she’s only half human when an Alien warrior is unleashed on earth to destroy the only weapon capable of stopping the forthcoming invasion, her.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on August 2, 2016 at 9:49 am

    Actually, from what I've seen, this story wouldn't really fall under the Mighty Whitey trope anyway, but still the type of story usually creates that situation. It's not really even Chosen One material, she's just a girl who has powers, it not the "there was an ancient prophecy that you are the oneRead more

    Actually, from what I’ve seen, this story wouldn’t really fall under the Mighty Whitey trope anyway, but still the type of story usually creates that situation. It’s not really even Chosen One material, she’s just a girl who has powers, it not the “there was an ancient prophecy that you are the one to kill this person” situation. Put even if she is part alien, as you said it does not stop a blonde, blue-eyed person from being cast. Or even from someone casting the character as male.

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