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  1. Posted: July 11, 2016In: SciFi

    When the atom bomb decimates Hiroshima, a diplomat from outer space must trammel humans’ development as a war species if his enraged federation is to reach a benign decision concerning human fate.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 12, 2016 at 3:23 am

    "If it were a comedy, a parody, that can work" There are alternate reality stories, such as Amazon's "The Man in the High Castle". The fact that it does not adhere to history is what makes the story sci-fi; it is fiction, not entirely based on fact. "There?s a reason SciFi movies are set in far, farRead more

    “If it were a comedy, a parody, that can work”
    There are alternate reality stories, such as Amazon’s “The Man in the High Castle”. The fact that it does not adhere to history is what makes the story sci-fi; it is fiction, not entirely based on fact.
    “There?s a reason SciFi movies are set in far, far galaxies or in the distant future or distant past. ” As for this, there are plenty of stories that are set in the present day but with futuristic technology, or near future. ?I believe CBS’s cancelled series “Extant” was set close to present day. Such as superhero movies. We don’t have technology on par with Iron Man or even Cap’s shield.

    “When the atom bomb decimates Hiroshima, a diplomat from outer space must trammel humans? development as a war species if his enraged federation is to reach a benign decision concerning human fate.”

    What is the alien’s specific goal? What specifically does he do to reach it?
    And how does the A-bomb dropping lead to this goal being set? It needs to have a casual relationship. Such as, if the goal were to kill humans before they develop technology to attack the aliens, then it would make sense; the aliens see the humans’ rapidly developing technology and wish to stop them before they become a threat.

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  2. Posted: July 9, 2016In: Drama

    Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 11, 2016 at 11:35 pm

    I can't speak for the show's quality, but I've seen something about a recent USA Network show, "Queen of the South" that has similar topic to yours. It's more about the woman becoming a Queenpin herself than being a runner, but it might be worth checking out. The show is based on a telenovela, "La RRead more

    I can’t speak for the show’s quality, but I’ve seen something about a recent USA Network show, “Queen of the South” that has similar topic to yours. It’s more about the woman becoming a Queenpin herself than being a runner, but it might be worth checking out. The show is based on a telenovela, “La Reina del Sur” if you understand Spanish, or want to watch with subtitles.

    I was under the impression that she had already left and her boss kidnapped the sister in order to make her return. But if she’s still working for him, why does he need to kidnap her sister to coerce her to do the job? She’s already working for him. Kidnapping the sister seems to serve no purpose. All he has to do, if he suspects she’s talking, is to send her on a suicide mission and not even alert her to the fact that he’s suspicious. Kidnapping the sister only draws attention, which is something a drug boss wouldn’t want.

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  3. Posted: July 9, 2016In: Drama

    Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on July 11, 2016 at 12:14 am

    "Maybe she needs to do a run in or out of Saudi Arabia? Or North Korea? Or China?" Yes, I didn't think about that. Maybe a different twist to think about is that the authorities know. The boss literally tells her pointblank: I notified the authorities of your future activity. Have fun! Then the drugRead more

    “Maybe she needs to do a run in or out of Saudi Arabia? Or North Korea? Or China?”
    Yes, I didn’t think about that. Maybe a different twist to think about is that the authorities know. The boss literally tells her pointblank: I notified the authorities of your future activity. Have fun!
    Then the drug runner has to come up with an even more creative way to sneak past them.
    To help you along, I looked up a?personal experience article from an actual drug runner(yes, I know is it?from a comedy site, so take any facts within it with a grain of salt). And, from the same site(again, check any facts with other sources, but you should always do that anyway), an article detailing some creative techniques. Another from a different site.
    Hope this helps.

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