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When a killer starts following the script seven actors deserted on a movie set must re-write their own ending before they die BEHIND THE SCENES.
So is "BEHIND THE SCENES" supposed to be the title? Because?at first I thought you were saying that they must re-write their own endings before they die behind the scenes. But if it's the title then maybe just insert it into a comment on the logline. Anyway, It sounds interesting, even if I'm not coRead more
So is “BEHIND THE SCENES” supposed to be the title? Because?at first I thought you were saying that they must re-write their own endings before they die behind the scenes. But if it’s the title then maybe just insert it into a comment on the logline.
See lessAnyway, It sounds interesting, even if I’m not completely sure the concept would work. But I think it would benefit if you somehow implied that their deaths were gruesome or whatever horror angle you’re looking for(personally if it were my idea I think I would go more comedic, and make the deaths laughable and ridiculous at the same time while they’re serious, and still make the killer a threat,). Maybe mention the type of movie? Something like: When a killer starts killing the actors of a chainsaw massacre movie according to the script…
One last thing, I’m not sure that the fact the location is deserted is important enough to be in the logline, it just adds more questions(Why is it deserted. why don’t they just leave, etc)
When seven actors arrive ready to shoot a horror movie but the location is desert. Soon they start dying just as the script describes.
>>"I think the intention was to specify that ??the location is a desert??." I thought he was trying to deserted. But yes, the lack of drive, of plot, is a glaring problem. Having an assemble cast is fine, but make sure each is given a reason to be a part of the cast in the first place. Since tRead more
>>”I think the intention was to specify that ??the location is a desert??.”
See lessI thought he was trying to deserted.
But yes, the lack of drive, of plot, is a glaring problem. Having an assemble cast is fine, but make sure each is given a reason to be a part of the cast in the first place.
Since this is horror, you tried to make the logline really reflect that, your execution was just not there. Maybe something “When a the actors for a horror movie start dying like in the script..”
Really just make the actual plot?the focus of the logline, ?does the location really matter? If it is a desert as Nir Shelter thinks, that doesn’t really scream horror anyway, but if it deserted, then is that really that important for the logline?
When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects a superhero, he breaks out of prison to create a cure for the woman he loves.
>>?"it turns out to be the only way to kill a superhero" It's not the only way, it's just that a villain who modified it modified is specifically so the superhero's known abilities wouldn't be able to counter it. (the plague itself wasn't meant to be a plague, and in fact plague is the wrong wRead more
>>?”it turns out to be the only way to kill a superhero”
See lessIt’s not the only way, it’s just that a villain who modified it modified is specifically so the superhero’s known abilities wouldn’t be able to counter it. (the plague itself wasn’t meant to be a plague, and in fact plague is the wrong word but I didn’t know exactly what it was when I started.)
But yes, the thing she created is the thing that is killing the man she loves. The concept is simpler than what people seem to be taking it for, but that’s because I included ‘superhero’.