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  1. Posted: May 1, 2016In: Thriller

    An undercover officer with a cocaine addiction infiltrates a gang of drug runners, and a blood bath ensues when a heist goes wrong and a rival cartel hunts them down for revenge.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 10:42 am

    Perhaps for realistic stories such as this, but even then, I disagree. There is/will be a character in someone's mind that is unlike any other, there is some plot twist that has never been seen before. That's not even including all of the fantasy/sci-fi worlds that have yet to be. Given how many copRead more

    Perhaps for realistic stories such as this, but even then, I disagree. There is/will be a character in someone’s mind that is unlike any other, there is some plot twist that has never been seen before. That’s not even including all of the fantasy/sci-fi worlds that have yet to be.
    Given how many cops show/films there have been, it does need to have an extremely familiar(such as NCIS, which could create even?more spin-offs, with each only being slightly different) premise or it just needs something unique. This idea has potential, yes, but based solely on the logline, it has nothing that would drive me to see it, unless perhaps I was just really craving another cop show.

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  2. Posted: May 1, 2016In: SciFi

    When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects a superhero, he breaks out of prison to create a cure for the woman he loves.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 9:58 am

    Ah, that's what I thought but I just wasn't sure. Okay, the gender isn't really important to the story. My original intent was to make him an African American man, which in fantasy/sci-fi are usually in non-important roles, or stereotypes. Or quite often stereotypical minor roles. One last comment,Read more

    Ah, that’s what I thought but I just wasn’t sure. Okay, the gender isn’t really important to the story. My original intent was to make him an African American man, which in fantasy/sci-fi are usually in non-important roles, or stereotypes. Or quite often stereotypical minor roles.
    One last comment, I always like a good standalone story, everything is turning into franchises now, rather than giving new(and more diverse) characters their chance to have their story told. Anyway, it is a world filled with superheroes and powered people, that does suggest it could easily be a franchise.
    Anyway, onto the story. While the points you bring up are things should definitely be answered, most of them probably shouldn’t be included in the logline, but if you’re curious I’ll explain a little. The superhero does have superpowers, but she isn’t immune to diseases. And there are more superheroes than her, which is why in my first version I referred to her as the “world’s greatest superhero”, so not everyone else is normal. As for how she gets infected in the first place, I will say that a villain got a hold of the plague and modified it to rid him/herself of this hero, but the MC still is guilty because he created such a deadly plague in the first place.
    And the last thing, he does commit a terrorist attack by releasing the plague, and he goes to prison for that reason, but again I think saying that he breaks out of prison is enough for the logline. As for why he engineered the plague, I haven’t the foggiest clue yet.
    I do agree, that the story that is presented as her backstory in this logline is a story in itself.

    Revision: When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague is modified to infect a superhero, the convict breaks out of prison to create a cure for the hero?she loves.

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  3. Posted: May 1, 2016In: SciFi

    When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects a superhero, he breaks out of prison to create a cure for the woman he loves.

    Dkpough1 Uberwriter
    Added an answer on May 1, 2016 at 3:54 am

    I have two different versions that I think could fix the misunderstanding with the pronoun. 1: When a bio-terrorist's engineered plague infects her, the convict breaks out of prison to create a cure for the superhero he loves. 2: When a bio-terrorist's engineered plague infects a superhero, the convRead more

    I have two different versions that I think could fix the misunderstanding with the pronoun.
    1: When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects her, the convict breaks out of prison to create a cure for the superhero he loves.
    2: When a bio-terrorist’s engineered plague infects a superhero, the convict breaks out of prison to create a cure for the hero he loves.

    Do either of these make it clear that the convicted bio-terrorist is the one the story is about?

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