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An ex-marine turned assassin, reconsiders his occupation when he finds out he has a sister: A detective that's hot on his trail.
Is it a two-way dilemma? That is, does the detective concurrently discover she is pursuing her brother?
Is it a two-way dilemma? That is, does the detective concurrently discover she is pursuing her brother?
See lessA corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.
Thanks for clarifying your story concept. The general outlines suggest the possibility of some compelling moral dilemmas for the singer -- and dilemmas are always a good thing in drama. Best wishes with your idea.
Thanks for clarifying your story concept. The general outlines suggest the possibility of some compelling moral dilemmas for the singer — and dilemmas are always a good thing in drama.
Best wishes with your idea.
See lessA corrupt record producer steals hit songs from musicians in the future and uses them in the past to create musical legends out of nobodies.
I think the revised logline is an improvement. But... Does she know the songs are stolen from the future? Or is the discovery that they are stolen from the future the event that triggers her effort to "fix everything"? And what does "fix everything" mean? In other words, what is her specific objectiRead more
I think the revised logline is an improvement. But…
Does she know the songs are stolen from the future? Or is the discovery that they are stolen from the future the event that triggers her effort to “fix everything”?
And what does “fix everything” mean? In other words, what is her specific objective goal?
(Plots involving time travel are always challenging because you have set up the time travel gimmick — what makes it possible to time travel. What’s your gimmick?)
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