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When a writer looking for a new story decides to follow people as way to find inspiration he soon realizes he has more interest in interfering with people’s lives than in simply watching them, which leads him to find a cult he wasn’t supposed to find and face the consequences.
Hello, I like the idea of a writer who follows people to get inspiration and then interfering - this is an interesting concept. But I don't feel 'organic' the part with the mysterious cult... how that fits with the character? If the movie is about the cult, then the logline uses too much words to deRead more
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See lessI like the idea of a writer who follows people to get inspiration and then interfering – this is an interesting concept. But I don’t feel ‘organic’ the part with the mysterious cult… how that fits with the character? If the movie is about the cult, then the logline uses too much words to describe how the main character finds the cult, and?what I like in your story becomes just a part of the first act. Maybe you can try to include in the logline what links the cult (what cult?) to the main character’s flaw/obsession/goal.
The story about a detective, whose case about murder of a little girl was stopped by Police chief because suspect was a New York’s most dangerous and powerful political figure, he is starting his own game, but when he finds out that she is his daughter from ex-wife which had left him few years ago, he becomes an unstoppable nightmare for suspect.
Hello, it seems to me that you are giving us?a vague idea of what the movie will be about before writing a proper logline - this a is stage in a process and it's ok, now it's time to take the next step and yes, the training section could help. About your concept, I feel like you're focusing a lot abRead more
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See lessit seems to me that you are giving us?a vague idea of what the movie will be about before writing a proper logline – this a is stage in a process and it’s ok, now it’s time to take the next step and yes, the training section could help.
About your concept, I feel like you’re focusing a lot about the context, maybe you should think more about the action.
After being wrongfully accused of murder, Herakles is sentenced to ten labors as punishment whilst searching for the true killer.
Hello, if it's about Hercules I suggest to include the character's name in the logline (when the character is well known, giving his name is the shortest way to tell a lot about him). Wasn't the labors 12? What I like in this concept is that it introduces a murder investigation in a well known myth.Read more
Hello, if it’s about Hercules I suggest to include the character’s name in the logline (when the character is well known, giving his name is the shortest way to tell a lot about him).
Wasn’t the labors 12?
What I like in this concept is that it introduces a murder investigation in a well known myth. In the myth, Hercules killed his wife and children under the influence of a evil Goddess. What if he was innocent… or not?
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