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Seven art students, all of different talents, find themselves trapped in a museum where they rewrite love, beauty and their own humanity before the groups survival overshadows their bohemian lives.
Hello, i like the basic concept of young artists being trappend in a museum but I miss a clear action line (and a rational reason for them to be trapped).
Hello,
See lessi like the basic concept of young artists being trappend in a museum but I miss a clear action line (and a rational reason for them to be trapped).
A grieving 12 year old boy must navigate between his physical and fantasy worlds, battling fears and doubts to uncover the origins of a mysterious dagger. This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become.
Hello, this kind of sentence sounds too vague to me 'This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become'. Too generic. 'battling fears and doubts' is too vague too. And what about the dagger? This element seems too much disconnected from everything else. I suggest to work on coheRead more
Hello,
this kind of sentence sounds too vague to me ‘This journey will test the truths of who he is and who he is to become’. Too generic.
‘battling fears and doubts’ is too vague too.
And what about the dagger? This element seems too much disconnected from everything else.
I suggest to work on coherence, logic, and to be more specific about everything.
See lessWhen a flippant prankster is ripped off by crazy scammer he seeks compensation but inadvertently starts a relationship with the scammer?s even crazier assistant.
Me too I ask 'How does his relationship with even crazier?assistant relate to his goal of seeking compensation?'
Me too I ask ‘How does his relationship with even crazier?assistant relate to his goal of seeking compensation?’