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A single mom with 4 kids by different fathers tangle in an endless typical chore must choose between her kids and her handyman lover
Hello, I like a lot the character of a mother with 4 sons from differents fathers, but to build a logline on a 'choice' is always bad. Choice is a matter of one scene, and it's internal. This could be a foundamental element of the character's developement but it has no place in the logline. I wouldRead more
Hello, I like a lot the character of a mother with 4 sons from differents fathers,
See lessbut to build a logline on a ‘choice’ is always bad. Choice is a matter of one scene, and it’s internal. This could be a foundamental element of the character’s developement but it has no place in the logline. I would appreciate more the concept if you tell straight what she must DO, something visual, plot elements not internal psychology.
A pert casino waitress accidentally tripled in stature by a scientist achieves her dream of Vegas stardom and falls in love wuth him, but sacrifices her size to save him when he’s kidnapped by a mobster. .,
Hello, I see a lack of logic in the logline: [sacrifice her size to save his lover from the mob]. I like the idea of a giant woman starring in Las Vegas.
Hello,
I see a lack of logic in the logline: [sacrifice her size to save his lover from the mob].
I like the idea of a giant woman starring in Las Vegas.
See lessA mild mannered accountant accidentally kills a mobster in a hit and run accident and must escape the mob?s revenge and another mob?s quest to silence him as he hightails it with the dead mobster?s wayward wife and two bratty kids to safety in the Arizona desert.
The boss of this website once gave us a logline 'checklist' and one point was 'if you cant read it in one breath, there's a problem'. There are too many 'and'... 'and must escape' ?'and another mob?s quest' 'and two bratty kids'... Anyway, I like the idea of a movie starting with an ordinary man kilRead more
The boss of this website once gave us a logline ‘checklist’ and one point was ‘if you cant read it in one breath, there’s a problem’.
There are too many ‘and’… ‘and must escape’ ?’and another mob?s quest’ ‘and two bratty kids’…
Anyway, I like the idea of a movie starting with an ordinary man killing a mobster in a car accident and being involved in a mob war.
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