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  1. Posted: June 24, 2016In: Examples

    When a traumatised Vietnam vet escapes arrest in a small town and takes to the hills, he must use all of his combat skills to evade a sadistic sheriff and his deputies.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2016 at 12:45 am

    What about: "When a wandering Vietnam vet is harraded by a small-town sadistic sheriff,?he takes to the hills and must use all of his combat skills to evade him and his deputies"

    What about:

    “When a wandering Vietnam vet is harraded by a small-town sadistic sheriff,?he takes to the hills and must use all of his combat skills to evade him and his deputies”

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  2. Posted: June 25, 2016In: Comedy

    (REVISED) When a single-minded entrepreneur conducts an unauthorised trial of a ?telepathic phone? in a small town and accidentally transmits a virus that makes everyone lose self-control, she must find a cure with the help of the only uninfected person – a technophobic hippy.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2016 at 12:30 am

    The situation is very interesting and original but I can't imagine?what we will actually see in the movie...what does the entrepreneur DO?with the hyppie? I'm not sure about the logic: it seems to me that the hyppie is uninfected because he didn't use the phone so he's not immune because of some kinRead more

    The situation is very interesting and original but I can’t imagine?what we will actually see in the movie…what does the entrepreneur DO?with the hyppie? I’m not sure about the logic: it seems to me that the hyppie is uninfected because he didn’t use the phone so he’s not immune because of some kind of anticorps to be researched. And if he used the phone, then the his technophobia is kind of irrelevant in the logline. I don’t know.

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  3. Posted: June 25, 2016In: Horror

    A young man, traumatized by his father’s death, must face his past when an institutionalized psychotic murderer escapes and preys upon his hometown.

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    Added an answer on June 26, 2016 at 12:22 am

    Hello, 'must face his past' sounds very vague to me. When the psycho escapes then what HAPPENS?

    Hello,
    ‘must face his past’ sounds very vague to me.
    When the psycho escapes then what HAPPENS?

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