Sign Up Sign Up

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sign In Sign In

Forgot Password?

If you'd like access, Sign Up Here

Forgot Password Forgot Password

Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.

Captcha Click on image to update the captcha.

Have an account? Sign In Now

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Sorry, you do not have permission to ask a question, You must login to ask a question.

Forgot Password?

To see everything, Sign Up Here

Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.

Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.

Logline It! Logo Logline It! Logo
Sign InSign Up

Logline It!

Logline It! Navigation

  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
Search
Post Your Logline

Mobile menu

Close
Post Your Logline
  • Signup
  • Sign Up
  • Logline Generator
  • Learn our simple Logline Formula
  • Search Loglines
  • About
  • Questions
  • Answers
  • Best Answers
  1. Posted: June 26, 2016In: Thriller

    When an assassin?s bartender-girlfriend unknowingly serves a poisoned martini to his boss, he takes her on the run from hired guns to find the true culprit.

    FFF Mentor
    Added an answer on June 27, 2016 at 8:59 pm

    The martini seems a very minor detail (it could be a beer and the plot would be the same).

    The martini seems a very minor detail (it could be a beer and the plot would be the same).

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  2. Posted: June 27, 2016In: Drama

    A once successful landowner with picture perfect family, suddenly finds himself at the mercy of his arch-rival, forcing him to juggle single fatherhood with reclaiming his livelihood and dignity.

    FFF Mentor
    Added an answer on June 27, 2016 at 8:52 pm

    I personally don't understand this logline.

    I personally don’t understand this logline.

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
  3. Posted: June 27, 2016In: Drama

    When his abusive stepfather tortures him for wrecking his Harley Davidson, a boy enlists in a underground fight club to toughen up and confront him.

    FFF Mentor
    Added an answer on June 27, 2016 at 8:49 pm

    I like this logline. I'd like it more if he was his biological father. Maybe you could skip the Harley in the logline, it's a minor detail that doesn't seem to affect the plot. Instead, you could specify the kind of tourture the main character must endure from his stepfather, the one that push im toRead more

    I like this logline. I’d like it more if he was his biological father. Maybe you could skip the Harley in the logline, it’s a minor detail that doesn’t seem to affect the plot. Instead, you could specify the kind of tourture the main character must endure from his stepfather, the one that push im to join the fightclub.?Maybe you could add an adjective to give a better understanding of the main character (‘a boy’).

    See less
    • 0
    • Share
      Share
      • Share on Facebook
      • Share on Twitter
      • Share on LinkedIn
      • Share on WhatsApp
1 … 6 7 8 9 10 … 177

Sidebar

Stats

  • Loglines 8,002
  • Reviews 32,189
  • Best Reviews 629
  • Users 3,735

screenwriting courses

Adv 120x600

aalan

Explore

  • Signup

Footer

© 2022 Karel Segers. All Rights Reserved
With Love from Immersion Screenwriting.