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A fanatical sports fan inherits a huge fortune from a previously unknown uncle. However, the estate includes ownership of his own teams hated local rivals and the proviso that he will only inherit if he takes control of them and leads them to the best season in their history.
Hello, there's something good in you logline. I think it's the possibilty of a inner jurney for the main character, the monomaniac?fan who must learn the true beauty of sport. Besides, I can't see what there will be actually in the movie... I think this is a very hard concept to exploit. The conceptRead more
Hello, there’s something good in you logline.
I think it’s the possibilty of a inner jurney for the main character, the monomaniac?fan who must learn the true beauty of sport.
Besides, I can’t see what there will be actually in the movie… I think this is a very hard concept to exploit.
The concept reminds me of?Brewster’s Millions, where Richar Pryor’s fantastic inheritance is linked to perverse obligation to spend?30 millions in 30 days, and he buys the shitty local baseball team with the idea of loosing money but… the team is doing better than he thought.
One suggestion, maybe the uncle is not an unknown uncle but a hated uncle who was a supporter of the team that the main character hates. And he was also a very rich gready uncle. Maybe the story take place in a town with two competing teams (it’s where the hate grows better).
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When his teenage son is murdered, a detective hesitated to bring the presumed killer to justice, after learning about their secret love affair.
Hello, here's my rule of thumb for loglines: never build a logline about a choice or a hesitation. (I personally don't like the loglines that doesn't respect this rule. The reason is that the movie seems to not move forewards, it's like stuck in a ping pong situation. The focus should be on the actuRead more
Hello,
See lesshere’s my rule of thumb for loglines:
never build a logline about a choice or a hesitation.
(I personally don’t like the loglines that doesn’t respect this rule. The reason is that the movie seems to not move forewards, it’s like stuck in a ping pong situation. The focus should be on the actual goal more than about the ping pong).
As she repeatedly travels back to a Georgia in 1815 from Chicago in 2016, a black woman must figure out how to stop time traveling before a ruthless plantation owner ends up killing her.
I like the concept. You should check this movie about two brothers?who are sent back in time to 1780 Antilles as slaves. http://www.allocine.fr/film/fichefilm_gen_cfilm=182097.html This movie presents a clear inciting event: when they tear up the 'freedom?document' inherited by their grand father thRead more
I like the concept. You should check this movie about two brothers?who are sent back in time to 1780 Antilles as slaves.
http://www.allocine.fr/film/fichefilm_gen_cfilm=182097.html
This movie presents a clear inciting event: when they tear up the ‘freedom?document’ inherited by their grand father they are punished by a witch who wants to teach them a lesson. It’s celarly a comedy.
In this movie they travel from France to Antilles at the beginning to collect their grand father will.
What it’s interesting here is that this movie addresses the two issues pointed out in the previous comments here (space travel and inciting event).
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