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A hacker must shut down the latest social media craze, The MindNet, after illegally connecting his mind with network?s creator and discovering a plan to use the MindNet as a means of population control.
I like the concept! I think the?problem is that we don't know what we will see in the movie... a physical heist at the MinNet server facility? people discussing hacking strategies on their keybords? I don't know if this is important at this stage. Anyway, I encourage you to write a 4 pages treatmentRead more
I like the concept!
I think the?problem is that we don’t know what we will see in the movie… a physical heist at the MinNet server facility? people discussing hacking strategies on their keybords? I don’t know if this is important at this stage.
Anyway, I encourage you to write a 4 pages treatment to test the concept, then go back at the logline.
See lessCelebrity hairdresser was falsely accused for kidnapping a secret son of the mayor of New York and he has to deliver him to a real kidnappers to save the life of his mother because of her large gambling debt.
Hello, I think you have some good elements in you story but in my opinion you didn't selected them properly and built the logline with the elements in the ?proper order. The goal appears to be saving the main character's mother. So, the inciting incident should be something like the mother being menRead more
Hello,
I think you have some good elements in you story but in my opinion you didn’t selected them properly and built the logline with the elements in the ?proper order.
The goal appears to be saving the main character’s mother. So, the inciting incident should be something like the mother being menaced by the mob.
Or, the goal is to prove his innoncence and the inciting incident the accusation of kinapping the son. The mother’s debt could be just a B story that doesn’t need to be mentioned in the logline.
Chose your spine and write the logline on it.
See lessAn Introvert, fed up with his mediocre life, runs off and ends up in a twisted experiment, his girlfriend must then find and save him from his own brainwashed mind before he is lost forever.
Hello, in my opinion you should decide if it's the story of the introverted guy or his girlfriend and write the logline from his/her point of view. Your logline start with the introverted boy as main character but in the second part it's the girl who takes the lead. You should mention what kind of eRead more
Hello, in my opinion you should decide if it’s the story of the introverted guy or his girlfriend and write the logline from his/her point of view.
See lessYour logline start with the introverted boy as main character but in the second part it’s the girl who takes the lead. You should mention what kind of experiment is it and what kind of danger it implies.