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When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.
Again this lack an original twist, or some irony... something that materialize the plot and give the reader a reason to read the script. Word "strange" means nothing. It's like "when a rich businessman is found hammered in the head, a cop must investigate a strange real estate lobby". You are very gRead more
Again this lack an original twist, or some irony… something that materialize the plot and give the reader a reason to read the script. Word “strange” means nothing. It’s like “when a rich businessman is found hammered in the head, a cop must investigate a strange real estate lobby”. You are very good at throwing ideas on the paper, and this is a true quality, really! This is very usefull in a brainstorming stage, but then you should work to the 2nd level and cook a “wow” concept. Why don’t you focus on the genre you like the most (the genre you know better) or a field where you have a good basic knowledge, to find some killer concept? There you talk about a “celtic” cult, here about a “christian” sect, are you really interested in celtic culture, history and myth, or Christians? Why not psycho hippies like Charles Manson? It will help to find good ideas in a field where you are confortable. Or you can keep firing with the logline machine gun 🙂
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1850s. When a shipwreck survivor swaps his convict uniform with a drowned lieutenant, he must keep up the charade or face execution from his rescuers.
the expression "keep up the charade" is too vague: it's what all the film is about!
the expression “keep up the charade” is too vague: it’s what all the film is about!
See lessWhen a university student returns native sacred objects to a rural town he awakens an old Celtic curse. He must confront the curse to save the town and himself.
You should include some details about what curse (whare are the material effects of the curse)
You should include some details about what curse (whare are the material effects of the curse)
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