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When a beautiful young woman is found brutally murdered, a detective must travel to the remote island to find the killer before they kill again!
I agree with the previous comment. A logline must hook the reader, this one is absolutely too vague.
I agree with the previous comment. A logline must hook the reader, this one is absolutely too vague.
See lessWhen a mortally wounded astronaut crashes into an isolated road-diner, the young waitress must protect herself and her customers from the oncoming alien threat!!
Hello, I think the logline is too focused on the beginning and not enough about the main plot (the unspecified alien threat). Moreover I don't think the logline is clear enough - is the astronaut human? The logic that connect the astronaut crash and the alien threat is not clear.
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See lessI think the logline is too focused on the beginning and not enough about the main plot (the unspecified alien threat). Moreover I don’t think the logline is clear enough – is the astronaut human? The logic that connect the astronaut crash and the alien threat is not clear.
When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.
"When an attorney, and pathological liar, is magically compelled to be honest for one day, he must struggle to win the biggest case of his career ? without telling a lie". This is a very good logline. You don't have to spoil the end but to set some hook, usually linked to the first turning point atRead more
“When an attorney, and pathological liar, is magically compelled to be honest for one day, he must struggle to win the biggest case of his career ? without telling a lie”. This is a very good logline.
You don’t have to spoil the end but to set some hook, usually linked to the first turning point at the end of the first act. A twist, some irony, something that hooks the reader, anything. And it’s even more difficult than this because you can’t go completely whimsical, you have to set a login in the whole.
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