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When a young computer prodigy discovers he exists in a virtual world, he reprograms reality to save his father with cataclysmic consequences.
Hello, "When a young computer prodigy discovers he exists in a virtual world", this is matrix, but the main problem is here: "he reprograms reality to save his father with cataclysmic consequences". What is the logic that links a computer prodigy, the virtual world and the life of is father? Until tRead more
Hello, “When a young computer prodigy discovers he exists in a virtual world”, this is matrix, but the main problem is here: “he reprograms reality to save his father with cataclysmic consequences”.
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When an ambitious underdog makes a pact with the devil, each time he accepts to restrain his freedom to go to some place, the devil grants him a wish, but as he buys his rise in society, his world become smaller and smaller, until he realizes the real consequences for him, his relatives, and humanity and that he needs to break the spell.
I think I'm still not enough clear but I don't know how to write it. The point is the quality of the original bargain: the main character gives away peace by peace the whole world; he starts from far countries where he doesn't plan to go, but he becomes greedy and always unsatisfied until he is confRead more
I think I’m still not enough clear but I don’t know how to write it. The point is the quality of the original bargain: the main character gives away peace by peace the whole world; he starts from far countries where he doesn’t plan to go, but he becomes greedy and always unsatisfied until he is confined in a city, then in a neighboroud, a house, a room… he understands that his destiny was to stop a series of big misfits and starts to use his wishes to make amend but the room left is never enough. I think it’s a very original concept. After each wish, the space available is reduced, this can be very thrilling. Is any of this clear?
See lessWhen an ambitious underdog makes a pact with the devil, each time he accepts to restrain his freedom to go to some place, the devil grants him a wish, but as he buys his rise in society, his world become smaller and smaller, until he realizes the real consequences for him, his relatives, and humanity and that he needs to break the spell.
Thanks for the feedback. I see it was not clear so I rewrote it -
Thanks for the feedback. I see it was not clear so I rewrote it –
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