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When a lone woman driving on an open country road and carrying cocaine that must reach its destination or else is menaced by a deranged truck driver, she must learn how to survive the day.
Hello, this part need clarification (it's what the plot is about): "learn how to survive the day". The first part is too wordy, and shoud mention a clear inciting event instead of a long description of the situation.
Hello, this part need clarification (it’s what the plot is about): “learn how to survive the day”.
See lessThe first part is too wordy, and shoud mention a clear inciting event instead of a long description of the situation.
When a woman?s badly burnt body is discovered, an occult writer investigates a strange Christian sect. She must escape the cult and expose their evil.
I don't think the main problem in your logline is that the character arc is not clear. The character arc is not necessary, but a story is often better with an arc. The character arc is a useful tool to build characters and stories. According to many books, producers always ask "what is the characterRead more
I don’t think the main problem in your logline is that the character arc is not clear.
The character arc is not necessary, but a story is often better with an arc. The character arc is a useful tool to build characters and stories. According to many books, producers always ask “what is the character arc?” – this could be a practical reason to try to create one.
Besides, there is something worse than not having a character arc and it’s to force a character to have one when it doesn’t belong to him or to the story.
About indiana jones, he must come to terms with his skeptical attitude and act as a true believer (“do not look the arc” for exemple).
See lessWhen a depressed office worker learns that his estranged, Chinese mob-boss father has been murdered, he must return home to avenge him!!
I can't establish the mood, is it an hard boiled action movie or a comedy? As a comedy, It's better (a clerk who mess with the chinese mafia). When a precarious chinese dishwasher learns that his estranged mob-boss father has been murdered, the mob rules force him to seek revenge.
I can’t establish the mood, is it an hard boiled action movie or a comedy? As a comedy, It’s better (a clerk who mess with the chinese mafia).
See lessWhen a precarious chinese dishwasher learns that his estranged mob-boss father has been murdered, the mob rules force him to seek revenge.