Have an account? Sign In Now
Lost your password? Please enter your email address. You will receive a link and will create a new password via email.
Please briefly explain why you feel this question should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this answer should be reported.
Please briefly explain why you feel this user should be reported.
A stubbornly independent man and his team of professional muggers need to stop a new rival team that doesn?t abide by the rules of mugging etiquette.
One more thing, an indipendent man in a team? I would avoid 'indipendent'. And I'm not sure stubbern is the good characterisation. Try to find what is the most far from a "new team" in town. Maybe a nostalgic, or someone very fond on mugger's traditions?
One more thing, an indipendent man in a team? I would avoid ‘indipendent’. And I’m not sure stubbern is the good characterisation. Try to find what is the most far from a “new team” in town. Maybe a nostalgic, or someone very fond on mugger’s traditions?
See lessA stubbornly independent man and his team of professional muggers need to stop a new rival team that doesn?t abide by the rules of mugging etiquette.
Try to restructure it with the inciting event at the beginning. And stress the comedy aspect in the writing (if it's a comedy. I hope it's a comedy).
Try to restructure it with the inciting event at the beginning. And stress the comedy aspect in the writing (if it’s a comedy. I hope it’s a comedy).
See lessA microbiologist and his son discover a new strain of mind controlling fungus in the deepest mine on earth, now they must stop it from getting to the surface and infecting the world above.
I like this a lot! In my opinion you should found some good adjectives to describe the main characters. I seea potential of "sacrifice" at the end, where the father or the son or someone unexpected decide to blow up the whole mine to save the others.
I like this a lot!
In my opinion you should found some good adjectives to describe the main characters. I seea potential of “sacrifice” at the end, where the father or the son or someone unexpected decide to blow up the whole mine to save the others.
See less