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When a woman gets murdered by her husband, she instigates her 5-year old child, who senses her presence, to take revenge against his father.
Hello, this is an interesting idea, but you should try to write the story from the point of view of the main character. I can't think of the mother as the main character (but she appears to be the MC in your logline). The child would be difficult too. Maybe the father? Anyway, once you choose your mRead more
Hello, this is an interesting idea, but you should try to write the story from the point of view of the main character. I can’t think of the mother as the main character (but she appears to be the MC in your logline). The child would be difficult too. Maybe the father? Anyway, once you choose your main characer (the one who can learn the most at the end of the movie) you can write the logline from his point of view.
See lessA 10-year,turned detective,must spoil his father?s every move toward his new teacher and step-mother to-be or see his mother?s marriage destroyed.
hello, this is a very funny and clever idea. I see a potential, but as a logline, you focus only about the set up but you should include some kind of "pay off". In fact, a mother ask her son to spy on his father, he spies, found out the father has an affair/or not - end of the story. In this form thRead more
hello, this is a very funny and clever idea. I see a potential, but as a logline, you focus only about the set up but you should include some kind of “pay off”. In fact, a mother ask her son to spy on his father, he spies, found out the father has an affair/or not – end of the story. In this form there’s no real story.
“when a jelous mother asks her 10 years old geek son to spy on his father, _____” then what happens ?
See lessWhen a young lawyer awakens ancient powers that cause her to be hospitalized for a psychotic break, an older woman, in guiding her back to sanity, introduces her to strange realities.
Too vague to build interest. Focus about the plot - what are the strange realities, what is the goal, what stands against the achievement of the goal.
Too vague to build interest. Focus about the plot – what are the strange realities, what is the goal, what stands against the achievement of the goal.
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