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When a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.
Now I see a logic wrestler/henchman so I think you should build your logline with this 2 clear elements. "When an amateur wrestler is hired as a henchman by a mafia buisiness man, then_______" what happens ? I don't have enough elements to continue te story.
Now I see a logic wrestler/henchman so I think you should build your logline with this 2 clear elements.
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When a 17 year-old does a work for the dole program at a Sydney Car Wash for a businessman, he becomes entangled into his shady world while his dreams of wrestling at the 2000 Olympic Games becomes more and more distant by the year. Note: This is a TV pilot.
hello "shady world" is too vague, doesn't build curiosity nor interest. I can't see the logic wrestler/car wash/businessman.
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I can’t see the logic wrestler/car wash/businessman.
In order to coordinate an extra-terrestrial landing that is expected to occur in the Australian outback, the Australian Government enlists a controversial think-tank, who are now depending on the success of this event for their own livelihood, think 'Contact' meets 'The Games' TV show.
Hello, the logline should be structured from the main character point of view (pick a person in the gouvernement maybe). Which country is irrelevant at this point of developement. The dimension of conflict should be clear.
Hello, the logline should be structured from the main character point of view (pick a person in the gouvernement maybe). Which country is irrelevant at this point of developement. The dimension of conflict should be clear.
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