1. Posted: July 6, 2015In:

    Natwar is a drama about a lower middle class man.who , after his innocent son arrested for being the accused of riots, wants to get his son free. This becomes increasingly difficult because of corrupt system.

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    I mean, the violent father must prove that his son is not like him.

    I mean, the violent father must prove that his son is not like him.

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  2. Posted: July 6, 2015In:

    Natwar is a drama about a lower middle class man.who , after his innocent son arrested for being the accused of riots, wants to get his son free. This becomes increasingly difficult because of corrupt system.

    FFF Mentor

    Lee brooks' version is not bad! Maybe the father is a violent man with a riot file and must learn diplomacy and justice to get his innocent son out of jail so that he can become a better man than him...

    Lee brooks’ version is not bad! Maybe the father is a violent man with a riot file and must learn diplomacy and justice to get his innocent son out of jail so that he can become a better man than him…

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  3. Posted: July 6, 2015In:

    When a scared young man defies tradition by refusing death from the woman who mated with him he must find a way to escape the cities retribution.

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    Hello, is this set in a future or fantasy world? That should be specified at the beginning - something like "In a postatomic tribe where mans are ritually killed by their female mates after a sacred sexual intercurse, a scared man must escape his fate to save his life". I like this but It should beRead more

    Hello, is this set in a future or fantasy world? That should be specified at the beginning – something like “In a postatomic tribe where mans are ritually killed by their female mates after a sacred sexual intercurse, a scared man must escape his fate to save his life”. I like this but It should be reworked in a better form.

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