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  1. Posted: July 7, 2015In: Public

    When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.

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    Added an answer on July 8, 2015 at 6:59 pm

    Hello, thanks for you feedback - in fact it's much more complicated than this. I really feel this story, so I need some feedback to understand if it's really interesting or not. I see it as a retrofuturistic nerd comedy, in the mood of the brilliant Computer Chess. The scientist spent many years toRead more

    Hello, thanks for you feedback – in fact it’s much more complicated than this. I really feel this story, so I need some feedback to understand if it’s really interesting or not. I see it as a retrofuturistic nerd comedy, in the mood of the brilliant Computer Chess.

    The scientist spent many years to build a machine that “can dream” in an independent lab founded by an ex-hippie genius who made a lot of money thanks to an algorhythm sold to a big finance company. But the old ex-hippie genius feels like he need to make amend so he finance a free lab with no “money making” issue- it’s the lab where our hero works on his machine who uses the hippie algorhythm too. But the ex-hippie is now ruined (I decided that he commits a “hippie suicide”, we will discover later that it’s because of a woman and not because of his bankruptcy).

    In the meantime our hero is hiring an intern and shows to him the marvelous free lab and his machine, then he discover that the intern faked his cv (but he’s brilliant in his own cheating way).

    So, when the lab risks being shut down, and the machine “killed” dismembered and sold in pieces, the intern come up with the plan: they will transform the ‘dreaming’ machine into a machine that is remotely controlled by the intern so that it will seem like the machine is intelligent. Their idea is to have funds to finance the lab but they have to pass tests to gain credibility.

    The problem is that they gain too much credibility, so that their lives are in danger, and the machine is stolen – the machine that our hero wants to save at any cost because he thinks that it’s alive.

    The self revelation will be that the scientist needs to “get a life”, and quit his obsession for his machine. At the end the machine “dies”.

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  2. Posted: July 7, 2015In: Public

    When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.

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    Added an answer on July 8, 2015 at 1:09 am

    His benefactor will receive money if the lab have an AI. But at the same time unprincipled people want to possess the machine, at any cost. I see troubles coming from everyhwere and each time it seems to go well it ends up in big troubles.

    His benefactor will receive money if the lab have an AI. But at the same time unprincipled people want to possess the machine, at any cost. I see troubles coming from everyhwere and each time it seems to go well it ends up in big troubles.

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  3. Posted: July 7, 2015In: Public

    When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.

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    Added an answer on July 7, 2015 at 6:02 pm

    Hello, my idea is that the scientist use his science to connect the mind of his intern and his machine so that his intern can speak through the machine. He uses some experimental pieces so that it's difficult for the examinators to understand if it's a true AI or a fraude.

    Hello, my idea is that the scientist use his science to connect the mind of his intern and his machine so that his intern can speak through the machine. He uses some experimental pieces so that it’s difficult for the examinators to understand if it’s a true AI or a fraude.

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