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When his research lab risks beign shut down, a passionate scientist and his nerdy intern build a believable fake AI, but they need to pass a series of tests to be taken seriously while unscrupulous corporations want to take possession of the invention.
Thanks for all the feedback, I will try to think about the stakes issue, about the antagonist, and about the m.c. final goal (save the lab is not high enough).
Thanks for all the feedback, I will try to think about the stakes issue, about the antagonist, and about the m.c. final goal (save the lab is not high enough).
See lessWhen told to deliver a package to a vicious mob boss, a desperate young Christian woman steals a car and finds herself menaced by a deranged truck driver pursuing her car across country roads, forcing her to devise a plan that would save her and her little brother held by the mob boss from death
Why christian? It seems like this adjective has no relation to the story.
Why christian? It seems like this adjective has no relation to the story.
See lessWhen told to deliver a package to a vicious mob boss, a desperate young Christian woman steals a car and finds herself menaced by a deranged truck driver pursuing her car across country roads, forcing her to devise a plan that would save her and her little brother held by the mob boss from death
I agree with the previous comment. In other words, you should build a single cause-effect pathway: in your logline the truck driver has no relation with the drug story. You should create a clear connection between the track driver and the drug buisiness.
I agree with the previous comment.
See lessIn other words, you should build a single cause-effect pathway: in your logline the truck driver has no relation with the drug story. You should create a clear connection between the track driver and the drug buisiness.