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After drawing the death card from an ancient tarot deck a skeptical young woman must use the other cards to escape her fate.
Hello, I suggest to change the inciting event into "drawing a bad set of cards" or something like this because the deat card doesn't mean death as the previous comment says. But the main problem is in the second part of the logline which is too vague. You describe a symbolic pattern but you should dRead more
Hello, I suggest to change the inciting event into “drawing a bad set of cards” or something like this because the deat card doesn’t mean death as the previous comment says. But the main problem is in the second part of the logline which is too vague. You describe a symbolic pattern but you should describe more clearly what wee see in the movie. How is she attacked or concretely doomed by the bad tarots? How the tarots can help her to escape her fate?
See lessA directionless raft guide enlists his professional athlete friends to help him find a mysterious woman in the forest who called upon him to save her, then disappeared.
I think the word "mysterious" should be banned from loglines. When this word appears, you know for sure that there is something to be clarified.
I think the word “mysterious” should be banned from loglines. When this word appears, you know for sure that there is something to be clarified.
See lessMistaken as Earth’s leader, due to his popularity on social media, a washed up actor is abducted by aliens to help prove humanity is worth saving from imminent destruction.
Hello, I recommend to change the aliens' plan to build a highway with something else or you can't get rid of the Hitchikers's guide reference (this is the reason for the earth to be destroyed in the novel and the movie). I like a lot that the alien pick the wrong person because of his social media pRead more
Hello, I recommend to change the aliens’ plan to build a highway with something else or you can’t get rid of the Hitchikers’s guide reference (this is the reason for the earth to be destroyed in the novel and the movie).
I like a lot that the alien pick the wrong person because of his social media popularity, but after the abduction you should build a plot( with one man an the aliens on an alien spaceship?).
I would avoid “arrogant” – it doesn’t help empathy, and we have already understand that he have some weakness from the context.
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