1. Posted: June 26, 2015In:

    A weak white supremacist falsely jailed for drugs, gets trained and helped escape by a racist black ex-cop inmate, to hunt down the bad guys and prove his innocence.

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    "When two inmates, a white supremacist and a black supremacist, learn they have been framed by the same chinese con artist, they team up to escape and get their brutal revenge, only to find he's far too smart for them".

    “When two inmates, a white supremacist and a black supremacist, learn they have been framed by the same chinese con artist, they team up to escape and get their brutal revenge, only to find he’s far too smart for them”.

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  2. Posted: June 26, 2015In:

    A downtrodden scientist learns hard lessons from the unintended consequences of time travel as he attempts to improve his present fortunes…but at what cost?

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    In fact, the more I read it, the more I think it's more an idea than a logline - an idea to write a logline about the consequences of time travel. I love time travel movies, You should focus about the story and write your logline.

    In fact, the more I read it, the more I think it’s more an idea than a logline – an idea to write a logline about the consequences of time travel. I love time travel movies, You should focus about the story and write your logline.

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  3. Posted: June 26, 2015In:

    A downtrodden scientist learns hard lessons from the unintended consequences of time travel as he attempts to improve his present fortunes…but at what cost?

    FFF Mentor

    I think this logline is too vague, I have no idea of what I will see in the movie (future, past, both, what happens, what are the consequences)

    I think this logline is too vague, I have no idea of what I will see in the movie (future, past, both, what happens, what are the consequences)

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