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The voyage to the edge of the solar system and beyond our universe starts in the Sphere of Light.
Hello, this is not a logline for me, more a 'tagline' or a kind of teaser.
Hello, this is not a logline for me, more a ‘tagline’ or a kind of teaser.
See lessThe Angel of God is brutalized by the police because of the color of his skin, and now his daughter a sergeant on the police force must choose her job or her family. The salvation of humanity is dependent on her choice. http://johnclandenstine.wix.com/thesentient
I read the first 18 pages of the script, the daughter doesn't show up... she can hardly be the main character. I have?the feeling of un unfocused story. I think you should define your main character, define what EXACTLY puts the story in motion (the inciting event), define a clear goal for the mainRead more
I read the first 18 pages of the script, the daughter doesn’t show up… she can hardly be the main character. I have?the feeling of un unfocused story. I think you should define your main character, define what EXACTLY puts the story in motion (the inciting event), define a clear goal for the main character. All this should be crystal clear in the logline and in the first 30 pages of the script.
“Your world did not end today, your world ended October 28, 1965, you never understood the greatest evil is not knowing you?re the evil.”
See lessI like this, this is the story I’d like to read, I want to read a story which explains this sentence.
Sharp, an obsessive abolitionist, fights against the English Establishment for the ending of slavery. His legal victory ensures the release of a black slave in London, starting the abolition of slavery in the British Empire.
Yes, an interesting subject. As a logline, I would cut the ending. Focus on the main character's jurney, find his flaw. ?"the abolition of slavery in the British Empire" will be just a tilescreen at the end of the movie. ?Maybe you can pick a clear individual antagonist to represent the 'establishmeRead more
Yes, an interesting subject. As a logline, I would cut the ending. Focus on the main character’s jurney, find his flaw. ?”the abolition of slavery in the British Empire” will be just a tilescreen at the end of the movie. ?Maybe you can pick a clear individual antagonist to represent the ‘establishment’. In my opinion, the strenght of this kind of biopic depends on the writer’s ability to create?a universal portrait of a man strugglig for his cause, rather that educating the masses to historical facts.
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