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An angel is brutalized by the police, and now his daughter, and humanity must fight him in order to survive.
Anyway, I like the concept.
Anyway, I like the concept.
See lessAn angel is brutalized by the police, and now his daughter, and humanity must fight him in order to survive.
"and humanity" is vague... Try to write the logline from the point of view of the daughter (because she's the main character) and not from the point of view of the brutalized angel.
“and humanity” is vague…
Try to write the logline from the point of view of the daughter (because she’s the main character) and not from the point of view of the brutalized angel.
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Hello, I like the concept, maybe you can add an adjective to characterize the main character?and this will force you to?think about the character's arc... It seems to me that the father can easily have an arc but not the teenager and his friend. What does the teenager must learn? What is his flaw?
Hello,
I like the concept,
maybe you can add an adjective to characterize the main character?and this will force you to?think about the character’s arc… It seems to me that the father can easily have an arc but not the teenager and his friend. What does the teenager must learn? What is his flaw?
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