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  1. Posted: May 18, 2016In: Comedy

    A young Midwestern Congressman must travel across the country with his rival for the White House, a veteran East Coast Senator, in the ultimate road trip reality show.

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    Hello, this is an interesting context, but where does the conflit which fuels the movie come from? In what specific way the reality show affects the rivalry between the two candidates?

    Hello, this is an interesting context, but where does the conflit which fuels the movie come from? In what specific way the reality show affects the rivalry between the two candidates?

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  2. Posted: May 16, 2016In: Comedy

    Afraid of losing his cushy corporate job, a slacker concocts a story about a fake ex-fianc? who left him at the altar but when he falls for a girl with the same name, he must keep her a secret to keep his job.

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    Added an answer on May 16, 2016 at 6:05 pm

    Can't he just say "I met a girl with the same name"? Maybe he can fake a depression (caused by?the said?being left on the altar), so he will need to hide the joy of his couple or being fired. The structure make me think about the movie "Le Placard" de?Francis Veber, where the main character learns tRead more

    Can’t he just say “I met a girl with the same name”?

    Maybe he can fake a depression (caused by?the said?being left on the altar), so he will need to hide the joy of his couple or being fired.

    The structure make me think about the movie “Le Placard” de?Francis Veber, where the main character learns that he’s about to be fired, but a friend tells him that he won’t be fired if he’s gay because the company needs to avoid criticism about being homophobic (they sells condoms).
    So he must?do his “coming out” (but he’s not gay!) and he falls in love with a female collegue so he needs to hide it. Wow, this was truly a good concept for a comedy.

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  3. Posted: May 13, 2016In: Comedy

    (Short Film) After being extremely ridiculed for how he talked as a kid, a hermit young teen must overcome his irrational fear of speaking to others in order ask a girl out to the dance before his best friend betrays him by beating him to the chase.

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    Added an answer on May 13, 2016 at 8:01 am

    The plot is clear and looks like a miniature movie so it's perfect for a short film. Be sure to have a good and original ending. As a logline, it is a little too wordy, I would cut the backstory ("after being rediculed...") and redoundant/unnecessary adjectives and stuff: 'A?hermit teen must overcomRead more

    The plot is clear and looks like a miniature movie so it’s perfect for a short film. Be sure to have a good and original ending. As a logline, it is a little too wordy, I would cut the backstory (“after being rediculed…”) and redoundant/unnecessary adjectives and stuff:

    ‘A?hermit teen must overcome his fear of speaking to?ask a girl out before his best friend beats?him to the chase’

    Maybe ‘a girl’ is vague… is it just some/any?girl, or the girl he love, or the beautiest?girl in the school… define the character, the goal will be clearer.

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