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After an escaped convict forces a divorced mother to hide him, they fall in love and must flee to Canada to start a new life.
In other words, what is the hook?
In other words, what is the hook?
See lessAfter an escaped convict forces a divorced mother to hide him, they fall in love and must flee to Canada to start a new life.
Hello, I think the logline is solid in structure, but the concept is not so high - this is not necessarly a bad thing. This concept in the hands of Xavier Dolan could win an oscar. Still, in reading the logline, I won't go to the movie (unless xavier dolan is directing it). Sure thing this is not myRead more
Hello, I think the logline is solid in structure, but the concept is not so high – this is not necessarly a bad thing. This concept in the hands of Xavier Dolan could win an oscar. Still, in reading the logline, I won’t go to the movie (unless xavier dolan is directing it). Sure thing this is not my genre. Do you love your concept? Is this the kind of movie you’d like to watch? If yes, write the script and try to create the most memorable characters!
See lessWhen a secret society of intellectual samurai compromise a tech company’s financial software, a psychic strategist must decode an ancient work of popular Japanese fiction before the global economy collapses.
In my opinion the main problem is that I can't see the link between the parts. 1. [the hacking of a financial software] 2. [a 'psychic strategist' (no idea of what that means) decoding a 'work of popular japanese fiction' (try to tell straight what that is)] In my opinion the beautiness of a loglineRead more
In my opinion the main problem is that I can’t see the link between the parts.
1. [the hacking of a financial software]
2. [a ‘psychic strategist’ (no idea of what that means) decoding a ‘work of popular japanese fiction’ (try to tell straight what that is)]
In my opinion the beautiness of a logline is when the reader undestands?the necessity which links all the elements AND at the same time he is surprised.
See less‘When the wolf attack?his sheeps, a shepherd must hunt the wolf’ – here we see necessity, logic, there’s even a character’s arc (shepherd to hunter) but not so much surprise.
‘When a sheep attacks a wolf, a hunter?must fish the golden carp” This is strange, surprising, but we can’t see the logic. There?CAN be a logic (the sheep goes violent following an ancient prophecy and the prophecy tells that only the blood of the golden carp can stop the madness) – but the logic must be clear for the reader.