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When his wife and daughter are both kidnapped and held in different locations, an emotionally stunted man must choose which one to save in a race against time.
Hello, as far as I'm concerned it's not a good idea to build a logline around a choice. A choice is a matter of one scene. What will we SEE in the movie? A man thinking one hour and a half about saving his daughter or his wife :)? I'm sure this is not your story! So try to tell the true story. GoodRead more
Hello, as far as I’m concerned it’s not a good idea to build a logline around a choice. A choice is a matter of one scene. What will we SEE in the movie? A man thinking one hour and a half about saving his daughter or his wife :)? I’m sure this is not your story! So try to tell the true story. Good luck!
See lessWhen one of his tenants is found murdered, a young and na?ve landlord must find a killer lurking in a secret part of the building, or risk bankruptcy.
Hello, I like the concept, a sort of 'phantom of the building'!?My personal opinion is that you should cut or rewrite the elements that are not directly linked to the plot - "young" is not interesting because it doesn't relate to the rest of the story. "Naive" too is a very week characterization. AnRead more
Hello, I like the concept, a sort of ‘phantom of the building’!?My personal opinion is that you should cut or rewrite the elements that are not directly linked to the plot – “young” is not interesting because it doesn’t relate to the rest of the story. “Naive” too is a very week characterization. Anyway, I think that a landlord investigating the death of his tenant is a clear, straigh, good concept. You can start working in deep on this story. I suggest you to build the story from the end: what or who is the killer? When you will have developped your story a little more, I’m sure you’ll be able to define your hero better.
See lessAfter witnessing a god rape her sister, a naive nymph seeks revenge, risking her life in the process.
I agree with the previous comments. Anyway, it's a good concept - be sure to read a lot of greek myths, that would help you create a story which is new and ancient at?the same time.
I agree with the previous comments.
See lessAnyway, it’s a good concept – be sure to read a lot of greek myths, that would help you create a story which is new and ancient at?the same time.