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A misanthropic girl and her rebellious friend are constantly looking for thrills to lighten up their dull lives but when she learns her half-sister has supernatural powers, she realizes having a normal life isn’t so bad.
Hello, is this for a feature lenght movie or a short? In my opinion this could be a quite accurate synopsis for a short. As a feature lenght movie, I share the opinions of the previous commenters. In detail, I'm not confortable with a character who "realize" something: this is 'internal', a loglineRead more
Hello,
See lessis this for a feature lenght movie or a short?
In my opinion this could be a quite accurate synopsis for a short.
As a feature lenght movie, I share the opinions of the previous commenters.
In detail, I’m not confortable with a character who “realize” something: this is ‘internal’, a logline should focus on the ‘external’ to attract me.
When a journalist discovers a cult crucifying men in the desert, he believes he has the story of a lifetime if he can live to tell it..
Hello, I remember some old versions of this concept, I like a lot this version because it reads good and smooth. The main character's goal is clear (document the story of a lifetime); the stakes are clear (death!); the opponent is clear (the cult). Maybe you could add an adjective to give a characteRead more
Hello,
I remember some old versions of this concept,
I like a lot this version because it reads good and smooth. The main character’s goal is clear (document the story of a lifetime); the stakes are clear (death!); the opponent is clear (the cult).
Maybe you could add an adjective to give a characterizatio to the main character (his flaw?) but honestly its flaw is implicit and evident: he wants journalistic fame (am I wrong?).
What are you waiting for? Write your movie!
See lessAfter accepting the reality of being raped by a woman, a reformed demigod assassin tries to deal with his depression by getting back into the business of hunting people who bear the Chimera Mark.
Hello, I like the story except for the chimera mark part, it doesn't mean anything (not even to the characters!) so you should skip. You can talk of a generic "mark" on his body but be sure to connect it to the rest of the story (the rape, depression, and the killing). Rock on.
Hello,
I like the story except for the chimera mark part, it doesn’t mean anything (not even to the characters!) so you should skip. You can talk of a generic “mark” on his body but be sure to connect it to the rest of the story (the rape, depression, and the killing).
Rock on.
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