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updated: In a world of high fantasy, four archetypical adventurers have a brush with death only to learn their fates are determined by a ?role playing game?; they journey into our world, where the laws they know no longer apply, to meet the godlike beings who control them (comedy).
"high fantasy": ok I didn't know this expression, then it's perfect.
“high fantasy”: ok I didn’t know this expression, then it’s perfect.
See lessRaani a 3rd grade school going girl from a poor family who always lies to her friends about her father, his job outside the country , and his soon expected return to home ; accepts the reality that her father is dead , and he will not come back ever.
One more logline's rule: don't use names (names means nothing) http://www.raindance.org/10-tips-for-writing-loglines/ It seems to me this is a european/author movie so I don't know if the rule "state the goal and stakes" should be respected. If some kind of goal or stakes are involved then it wouldRead more
One more logline’s rule: don’t use names (names means nothing) http://www.raindance.org/10-tips-for-writing-loglines/
It seems to me this is a european/author movie so I don’t know if the rule “state the goal and stakes” should be respected. If some kind of goal or stakes are involved then it would be useful to include them in the logline. An inciting event would be useful and appreciated too.
“When a 8 years old girl from a poor family changes school, she made up a fake father to be proud of, only to learn that she must accept the reality to make true friends”.
See lessupdated: In a world of high fantasy, four archetypical adventurers have a brush with death only to learn their fates are determined by a ?role playing game?; they journey into our world, where the laws they know no longer apply, to meet the godlike beings who control them (comedy).
Hello, I found this logline almost good, I just wonder if it respects the structure of the script. I mean, I'm not sure if the movie will be about a journey to escape a fantasy world (Truman show/thirteen floor/dark city), or, people from a fantasy world that look for their creators in our world (liRead more
Hello, I found this logline almost good,
I just wonder if it respects the structure of the script. I mean, I’m not sure if the movie will be about a journey to escape a fantasy world (Truman show/thirteen floor/dark city), or, people from a fantasy world that look for their creators in our world (like ?fishes out of water?/last action hero).
I think you should make a creative decision about that. In one case the inciting event would be when the characters discover their fates are determined by a sort of game and the resolution would be when they met their creators at the end, in the other case the second act would start when they leave the fantasy world.
Finally, I suggest to find a better description of the fantasy world that a “high fantasy world”: try to find one or two adjectives that point out the specificity of this world, or just say “fantasy” if it’s a kind of “standard” fantasy world.
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