1. Posted: April 17, 2016In:

    Trivial thieves hatch a plot to heist big business’s grand scam: the cure for cancer.

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    Hello, me too I don't understand what 'grand scam' means here. Try to tell it straight: what do the thieves must steal?

    Hello,
    me too I don’t understand what ‘grand scam’ means here. Try to tell it straight: what do the thieves must steal?

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  2. Posted: April 18, 2016In:

    After finding a student showing signs of self-harm, Thomas, an intrapersonal anxious janitor must risk his job in pursuit of helping the young teen learn the beauty of life through his secret rooftop garden.

    FFF Mentor

    Hello, I agree with the previous comments: be specific, make a crative decision about the self-harm, clarify why the janitor's?job is at risk. I like the idea of a movie about roof gardening as a healing process.

    Hello, I agree with the previous comments: be specific, make a crative decision about the self-harm, clarify why the janitor’s?job is at risk. I like the idea of a movie about roof gardening as a healing process.

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  3. Posted: April 18, 2016In:

    When the world?s greatest superhero succumbs to an unknown disease, a convicted bio-terrorist tries to turn his engineered plague into a cure.

    FFF Mentor

    According to my understanding of this logline, the movie is about a mad scientist trying to engeneer a cure for his ex-girlfriend. He's a bio terrorist and she's a superhero but the movie still seems to be a boring research in a lab.

    According to my understanding of this logline, the movie is about a mad scientist trying to engeneer a cure for his ex-girlfriend. He’s a bio terrorist and she’s a superhero but the movie still seems to be a boring research in a lab.

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