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When a teenager loots methamphetamine from a crime scene, he must sell to it to pay for his dads failing business before the owner, a psychopathic cop, hunts him down.
Hello, try to include an adjective to characterize the main character (its flaw maybe?). Try to make it clear that the policeman is after the drug and not involved in the family business.
Hello, try to include an adjective to characterize the main character (its flaw maybe?). Try to make it clear that the policeman is after the drug and not involved in the family business.
See lessWhen a Jewish underpants manufacturer suddenly dies, his clumsy, mechanic son must fight off a stupid Mafia loan-shark, until he can convince the inventive transvestite manager to relinquish control.
Hello, I don't get the relation between the parts... jewish, underpants, mafia, transvestites... theese are colorful details but I can't see a pattern, a structure, a solid story.
Hello,
See lessI don’t get the relation between the parts… jewish, underpants, mafia, transvestites… theese are colorful details but I can’t see a pattern, a structure, a solid story.
A serial killer taxi driver takes revenge on behalf of victimised passengers while trying to avoid detection.
Hello, I suggest you to start with the standard logline formula that helps you to detect story problems. for exemple: "When a delusional taxi driver convince himself he's the exterminator angel, he must avenge his customer's wrongs to save his own soul". I don't know if this is true to your story buRead more
Hello, I suggest you to start with the standard logline formula that helps you to detect story problems.
for exemple:
“When a delusional taxi driver convince himself he’s the exterminator angel, he must avenge his customer’s wrongs to save his own soul”.
I don’t know if this is true to your story but when you put things in this way it’s a lot easier to understand the concept and test its potential.
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