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  1. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Drama

    Two lovers, living in different universes, have the unfortunate fate of acknowledging each other’s existence as the two lovers start dreaming of being in each other’s body and both fall madly in love with each other. .

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    Hello, in my opinion the problem is that you start with "two lovers", but they fall in love only later in the logline?(when they start dreaming of being in each other's body). Then, how do they know that their lover is in another universe and not two blocks away? I think there's something good in thRead more

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    in my opinion the problem is that you start with “two lovers”, but they fall in love only later in the logline?(when they start dreaming of being in each other’s body). Then, how do they know that their lover is in another universe and not two blocks away? I think there’s something good in the concept but it needs more work to be shaped in a coherent plot and a coherent logline.

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  2. Posted: April 19, 2016In: Comedy

    A Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.

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    Added an answer on April 19, 2016 at 6:54 pm

    I miss a main character.

    I miss a main character.

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  3. Posted: April 9, 2016In: Thriller

    On the verge of a botched murder, a lady Sailor conspires with the victim to wreak revenge.

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    Added an answer on April 9, 2016 at 7:46 pm

    Hello, ? ?I don get it... What murder, what victim?

    Hello, ? ?I don get it… What murder, what victim?

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