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  1. Posted: April 1, 2016In: Drama

    From the moment Dae Stallard gets the unwanted news that his girlfriend is pregnant, the journey of a young, self-absorbed man becoming a flawed but loving father begins, ending with the high school graduation of his child.

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    Added an answer on April 1, 2016 at 9:54 pm

    Hello, I suggest to avoid the name of the character (it's a common sense rule in logline writing).

    Hello, I suggest to avoid the name of the character (it’s a common sense rule in logline writing).

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  2. Posted: April 1, 2016In: Drama

    A brilliant but troubled Lawyer must let go of what is holding him back, save his son, and keep his family together.

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    Added an answer on April 1, 2016 at 9:51 pm

    I agree with the previous comment

    I agree with the previous comment

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  3. Posted: March 30, 2016In: Drama

    Forced out on his own for the first time, a mentally-challenged man with impulse control problems must prove to himself he can overcome his limitations and achieve his dream of a “normal” life.

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    Added an answer on March 30, 2016 at 9:00 pm

    Hello, I still find it too vague - This vaguely make me think of Bad Boy Bubby?http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0106341/

    Hello,
    I still find it too vague –

    This vaguely make me think of Bad Boy Bubby?http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0106341/

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