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When a nerdy Greek scholarship holder fall in love with his popstar fellow student, they face a long-distance relationship as she is on world tour always traveling and he threatens to lose his top-mark college grant due to lovesickness.
Hello, I remember old versions of this... I think you still spread the interest on too many events - my personal opinion is that you have to pick the one inciting event, the one problem, the one goal. Focus on a single storyline. This movie can't start with a young greak dreaming to be accepted in aRead more
Hello, I remember old versions of this… I think you still spread the interest on too many events – my personal opinion is that you have to pick the one inciting event, the one problem, the one goal. Focus on a single storyline. This movie can’t start with a young greak dreaming to be accepted in an american college, winning the grant,?winning the?love of a popstar, facing lovesickness… this could work in a book, maybe.
For exemple,
When his popstar grilfriend leaves for?a world tour, a neardy geek must beat?his lovesickness to keep his college grant.
But there are still many problems, because how can a fight against lovesickness be filmed? What we will see in the movie? And the genre should be clear, is it a love drama or a comedy?
See lessA mentally-challenged man with impulse control problems struggles to play by society’s rules when circumstances force him out on his own for the first time.
Hello, this is too vague for me... "circumstances"..."man"... "society's rules"... ?Was the main character living in an underground bunker, was he the simple minded gardener facing the death of his master? there's a hundred movies in this blueprint for a logline.
Hello, this is too vague for me… “circumstances”…”man”… “society’s rules”… ?Was the main character living in an underground bunker, was he the simple minded gardener facing the death of his master? there’s a hundred movies in this blueprint for a logline.
See lessPresumed killed during a fierce storm, an astronaut left on Mars must survive with meager resources and no communication with earth until the next mission to the planet — in 4 years.
Anyway, I don't think this movie can be sold on a logline - who wants to read at least 120 pages about a man growing potatoes on mars for 4 years?
Anyway, I don’t think this movie can be sold on a logline – who wants to read at least 120 pages about a man growing potatoes on mars for 4 years?
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