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An afflicted paleontologist joins a research crew on a mission to a Jovian moon to recover an ancient fossil that may cure her disease but must escape after discovering the relic can transform them into terrifying creatures.
Hello, too many things in this logline, I suggest you to focus on the main pillars of the story. What is the true inciting incident? In your kind of movie usually the inciting incident is when the monster shows up. Then what is the true goal of the main character? Escape is rarely a good gial, it meRead more
Hello, too many things in this logline,
See lessI suggest you to focus on the main pillars of the story. What is the true inciting incident? In your kind of movie usually the inciting incident is when the monster shows up.
Then what is the true goal of the main character? Escape is rarely a good gial, it means a passive character. Don’t mention the name of the planet, it means nothing in terms of story. You have a good and original detailed reason to dig a moon, to find a healing fossil, but this is just the matter of one scene, then it seems that the movie become vague undetailed and very conventional.
When her field badge is suspended, a responsibility adverse FBI agent must escort a terminally ill orphan on her ‘dying wish’ road trip to Disneyland.
Me too I miss the link FBI - orphan.
Me too I miss the link FBI – orphan.
See lessWhile working under cover on a state-of-the-art submarine, a United States government agent learns that her former husband intends to ?terminate her with extreme prejudice?.
When an undercover agent on a state-of-the-art submarine learns that her former husband intends to kill her then what happens? (does she care, in her undercover mission, in the submarine?)
When an undercover agent on a state-of-the-art submarine learns that her former husband intends to kill her then what happens? (does she care, in her undercover mission, in the submarine?)
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